I like the repetition of humanity here. I thought it played an interesting role in the poem and wasn't overdone. It very much reminded me of something that you would read aloud, more so a poem meant to be heard than just read! :)

"I love life,
But I detest you."

I love this wrap up to the ending. Very strong!

Yakiiiii I got the meaning of this! you are a goddess XD good work, bravo!!!