Time for Fall

by PinkyPrincess   Aug 29, 2011


The season has changed,
cold weather engulfs the heat.
The clouds conceal the sun,
the leaves are changing colors.

Distraught and weak,
like a falling leaf in the fall,
fading around the death of life,
lost in the loneliness of nature.

Surrounded by nothingness,
strong winds separate the leaves,
while they inevitably crush together;
silent except for the crisp breakage.

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  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this as well! Fall is a great season with the many colors and i know i have been looking forward to it. I loved how u described it in this but the words also portrayed a deeper meaning. Great write! 5/5.

  • 13 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    So nicely penned :) loved it....

  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    Fall is my fav season, it has this warmth and mystery in it, which is translated beautifully through your poem. Every verse has its own deep meaning, and all together they play a symphony of emotions.

    Great job as always :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    An excellent poem for fall, it was easy to see the season changing
    loved it

    Connie

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Very descriptive words! I think you did great on this piece and it definitely got me even more excited for fall than I already am! I usually hate nature poems, but I love your poetry so i knew Id even like your nature pieces and i really did. Your choice of words didnt bore me at all, it kept me really interested and I could picture the season happening!

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