by Jacob Parker Aug 29, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Endless it seems. |
Wow... This is really really good I loved it everything was perfect too bad there's only 5 cuz u could go a hell of a lot furthure :) :) 5/5 |
by Jacob Parker
Thank you very much. |
by Jacob Parker
Thank you very much. |
by Jenni
I think that this poem flows really well and I like the depth it reached. Your questions encourage the reader to think and pull them in because they might find an answer in your poem. I also liked the flow and that it ended with the same words it started. The emotions are definately powerful. |