I think that this poem flows really well and I like the depth it reached. Your questions encourage the reader to think and pull them in because they might find an answer in your poem. I also liked the flow and that it ended with the same words it started. The emotions are definately powerful.

Thank you very much.

Thank you very much.

Wow... This is really really good I loved it everything was perfect too bad there's only 5 cuz u could go a hell of a lot furthure :) :) 5/5