by Colm Aug 29, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The sweet stickiness of strawberry jam |
by christopher
Colm this poem is confusing. depth of this poem has turned into confusion and that simplicity us mortals search for is missing, nevertheless the colour and smells are uplifting and reassruing, i feel you got lost somewhere through the centre of this poem. |
Yeah, this poem required a lot of thinking on my part. I love poems that require a lot of thinking sometimes because then you're searching for a deeper meaning that sometimes only few can find. |
by BlueJay
This is interesting and very creative. The imagery is awesome, the theme is really cool. There us a flow and an amazing word choice. The author's voice is really very clear, and I think that this piece is excellent.. |
by Lonely Rider
What a beautiful imagery ... really enjoyed reading it :) |
Very beautiful. I love the imagery and the colors you penned. I'm a sucker for a color theme in poetry. |