Thank you:) |
by BlueJay
This piece is perfection. There is emotion and passion, intensity, rhyme, flow, rhythm, imagery, story, reason, everything that is needed in a good poem. You start off in an okay manner, but it really does pick up speed and end in a fantastic way. Of all this "type" of poem this one is definatly unique and stands out to the reader. Good job. |
by Dave
Very good job! |