Comments : I'm still here

  • 13 years ago

    by fakingeverything

    Thank you:)

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is perfection. There is emotion and passion, intensity, rhyme, flow, rhythm, imagery, story, reason, everything that is needed in a good poem. You start off in an okay manner, but it really does pick up speed and end in a fantastic way. Of all this "type" of poem this one is definatly unique and stands out to the reader. Good job.

  • 13 years ago

    by Dave

    Very good job!