I relate to this girl. <3 it
Emotions pouring out.
Such a good writer(:
Love you 5/5

I think that this poem flows quite well and I think that the first few verses definately set a very nice image. I also love the emotions in this because they seem to be somewhat overwhelming yet you say strong and know that you decide on your own. Well done.

As a precursor to "What's wrong with me" this is a powerful statement. You tick off the proofs of casting the old one aside, the reasons you lost trust in him, and then you simply state your intentions. Crisp, clean and succinct.