Yaki, this write is really heartbreaking. The flow was nice. Good job. :)

Yaki , honestly, Ive always said this about a lot of your poems, but i feel like they are something my children will read in English books one day, like I have Emily D ickensons poems...this was amazing. The end really was superb seriously!! I liked the fact you didnt know where broken hearts go but you stated yours must be where they are..that was just realy creative :) Loved it

A beautiful thought carved into a poem...u pen good work..(:

I'm glad I finally found some time to read and comment your poetry, or I would have truly missed some great writes by you, miss thang!

The imagery here is overwhelming in each stanza, and it has such different images. I can picture a series of artwork connected to this piece, you have so clearly laid it out for me to see.

I love the second stanza I think it was about washing in an unknown river. It really gave a twinge of sadness, even more so than the rest of the poem. The lonely feeling struck me hard, here. This is such an emotional poem that it's hard to pinpoint what made me feeling which emotion.. I was in rollercoaster mode.

That ending is lovely, Yaki! I was waiting for an ending like this, because I know you and your poetry :) You never disappoint!

I definitely agree with chelsey!
Your style is something I bet could be published!
this was amazing, I love how you give me goosebumps everytime I reach your closing lines, its kind of weird :) but I love the feelings you give me!

I have the same questions btw, and on a side note, i have the same answer as well!

very mature, coherent, and strong stated poem.
I love it, another front page for me!