by Sparkling snow flake
Great poem! |
This is happening with me too girl! We loved them so much && they tore us apart, & even though we found someone new they wont leave us nomatter how hard we try. I'm dealin with it right now. But i LOVE this poem, so true, with strong emotion.<3 |
by nouriguess
Had been there, too. :) |
Very strong dynamics here: the broken trust, the new, hopefully trustworthy one, yet you can't get the bad boy out of your system. If you use your works to learn more about yourself, try writing a follow up poem from the point of view of the cad who you had to give up. |