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by CoLliN Aug 30, 2011 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
When the world turn's its back on me And i turn my back on the world Your the only one I see The way you make my fingers shiver The way you make me quiver Your the only thing that matters Because you renew my liver I bite my lip as i see you pass me by Walking with a woman Short skirt Avon In a tray Worn with a tie No matter my mood you make me smile Sometimes so much you make me cry I can't help but have deep feelings for you your the only thing that makes sense when I'm in my blue When my wife When my job When my friends When mom When the government kick me with a boot You call me to sip some of your loot Your one with many flavors Your full of many favors Some go down my throat on fire Some turns me into a liar I don't care that your shorter than a gnome Because Mrs. Rum... Your always on my top shelf.. sitting and waiting at my HomeBy CoLliN
by Jenni
This ending came surprising. :P I really like the descriptions and the comparisons though, I thought that they fit quite well. I also like the emotions in this piece and that it flows so very well, keep up writing :)