by Jenni Aug 30, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Sometimes I wonder |
Well-written, Jenni. |
by Jess
OH WOW! This Is Amazing! Such Raw Talent! I Wish I Were As Perfect A Writer As You. Its There And The Message Is So Clear. (Unlike My Sloppiness, LOL), I REALLY Liked The Ending JUST WONDERFUL. All Your Poetry Is So Perfect.! 5/5 |
I love this! I love the emotions you've portrayed.. I really liked the beginning, and the flow of the poem was great. And the ending was bitersweet for me, I felt like it was nice but there was something sad about it. I liked your poem a lot. Well done! |
by Ms Happiness
This poem is really nice:)my gav stanza is the last one:) 5/5:) |
by L
Wow, nicely executed. I like the flow and definitively I love the last stanza. |