Ohhhh myyy goshhhh jenniferrrrrrrr my godddd oh oh godddddd JENNIFER! u dont have any sense! u are merciless! u should have known how blown away i will be once i read this write...you should have thought about me before you write this fshhhhhhhhh!!! mrrrrrrrrr!!! piece of poetry! GOSH
now how the hell do u think i'll ever write better than u do, ha?? dammit and now i will be forced to drift here and there searching for new expressions and words and stuff and feelings...you know what??? nominated.. :P

Good job, girl...

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I will save one from now on, for you!!! :P

This is truly amazing Jen, I love the structure and the choice of words, Ill give it 5/5 :)

I agree Oh my gosh!! This is just simply amazing! You have created a beautiful piece with a fantastic structure. Your word choice may be simple but it fits this piece so nicely. There is a magnificent flow. I love all of your work but this might just be my favorite of yours.

Otherwise
I will lay my heart
to rest..
with those fading
memories.

While I love the beginning, the middle, and oh yeah the whole freaking piece, this, ^^ is my favorite stanza. It ties everything together so well. You have used some amazing examples of where and how to use emotion. 5/5.

- normally my comments aren't this long or in depth, so sorry to put so much!!

Whether u write simple or too deep ..u always write excellent ..

JENIIIIIII this was soooo good i think noura has said it alll, quite remarkable .... n i want moree 5/5

I really liked it and enjoyed reading it. The wording was good and it is a good length. It flowed nicely from beginning to end.

gave it a 5/5

Wow, nicely executed. I like the flow and definitively I love the last stanza.

This poem is really nice:)my gav stanza is the last one:) 5/5:)

I love this! I love the emotions you've portrayed.. I really liked the beginning, and the flow of the poem was great. And the ending was bitersweet for me, I felt like it was nice but there was something sad about it. I liked your poem a lot. Well done!

OH WOW! This Is Amazing! Such Raw Talent! I Wish I Were As Perfect A Writer As You. Its There And The Message Is So Clear. (Unlike My Sloppiness, LOL), I REALLY Liked The Ending JUST WONDERFUL. All Your Poetry Is So Perfect.! 5/5
-Jessi:)

Well-written, Jenni.

5/5

-Heather