I wish I had read this before I used my votes. I'm blown away at the beauty , the imagery and the absolute talent shown in this poem.

You have now been added to my favorites so I won't miss a thing > Brillliant

You've done a very perfect job with this poem, its in no way easy to come up with ideas for such a poem, yet you've done a magnificent job, the rhyming scheme was unbelievably good. Worth the full grade :)

I've missed your poems and the internal beauty of each word. You've only gotten better since I have been gone.

I liked this form when you introduced it the very first time and have been trying to do one but it just does not work out the way you have penned it! Liked the read very much!