Hello my dear,

I can't believe this poem of yours has been overlooked. It'd clear to see you've thought hard about the layout, so it compliments the theme. Unless I'm wrong, it's about a split personality. The use of a mirror image of you and verses that read in the 1st and second tense.

It's a sad, tortured poem, written with heart and soul, and one I believe others should read.

Well done and stay strong.

Michael x