When we first met,
Something happened inside,
I knew you felt it too,
Its not easy to hide.
I don't know what it was,
I just knew from right then,
I need you in my life,
Until the very end.
The thought of you going,
Makes my stomach turn,
It makes me feel dizzy,
And makes my eyes burn.
I couldn't imagine,
One day without you here,
You said if you love something,
Keep it very near.
But I couldn't hold on,
I lost you to death,
It was like I stopped breathing,
The day that you left.
A day like no other,
I will never forget,
The last stupid words,
Makes me burn with regret.
I'll never forget you,
You are still my one,
Forever and always,
No matter that your gone.
This poem flows really well and it filled with emotion. I really like how you slowly told what happened because it gave me the possibility to imagine it. This is definately a heartfelt write.