Pains Of Yesterday (acrostic)

by Brittany C   Sep 1, 2011


Pain came in one giant wave
Apt to consume my heart
It allowed my sins of the past to hunt me
Nothing but darkness enveloped me then
Searing my mind, scrambling my thoughts.

Out of time, winter is here
Feeling lost as the cold grips my soul.

Youth gone, left behind and forgotten
Easy! Ha, nothing is
Stars were gone from my sky
Throbbing, the pain that was deep inside
Eating is something I forgot
Rescue me, please someone.
Dormant was my happiness
And from that wreckage of
Yesterday I escaped because of you.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was really quite good, I didnt quite get the first stanza and the flow was a little off, but this was very well done, I'll admit though, I prefer the latest one to this.

    A good piece in all though

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    You are amazing, amazing and amazing and amazing!
    you used all of the words given and you made a beautiful meaningful acrostic, believe me this made my day! for sure I'll nominate this for the next week and I hope it wins, because the contest was really harsh but you nailed it with this write! and I really want to congratulate you for your brave heart, ha! XD I myself would suck at writing such a piece. ;p
    In my opinion, in my very humble opinion, you did an awesome job incorporating all of the ideas I gave you and the words given too and it was a challenge to write an acrostic which you've never tried before but you showed lots of talent, good job.

    5/5

    And a nomination!
    Have a good day.

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Very good strong wording with great emotion I loved it :) 5/5

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