Very good strong wording with great emotion I loved it :) 5/5

You are amazing, amazing and amazing and amazing!
you used all of the words given and you made a beautiful meaningful acrostic, believe me this made my day! for sure I'll nominate this for the next week and I hope it wins, because the contest was really harsh but you nailed it with this write! and I really want to congratulate you for your brave heart, ha! XD I myself would suck at writing such a piece. ;p
In my opinion, in my very humble opinion, you did an awesome job incorporating all of the ideas I gave you and the words given too and it was a challenge to write an acrostic which you've never tried before but you showed lots of talent, good job.

5/5

And a nomination!
Have a good day.

This was really quite good, I didnt quite get the first stanza and the flow was a little off, but this was very well done, I'll admit though, I prefer the latest one to this.

A good piece in all though