by Innocent Fairy Sep 1, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The first night we meet |
by Brittany C
I liked it but it seemed like there was more to tell. The flow was ok and so was the wording and length. |
Wow girl. I LOVE this so much! She gave in one time and how he seemed kind disappeared! I can see that happening girl. But amazing poem. (: 5/5 |