This is really good and very truthful it hits hard for people with hatred in heart and are blinded with hate... It's really good I loved it 5/5 :)

^ Kristian is right.

A very well written poem of yours. Keep going :)

This poem is very sensual I really enjoyed it. I'm in love and have recently found it so I love reading about love.

I'd like to suggest to you not capitalizing all of your stanza's. I started writing non rhyming poems a while ago and thats what I was doing, some other poems showes me how much better some comma's and non capitalized letters make your poem. I could show you if you'd like :)

Other than that, I'd still give this a 5. Your feelings were very well shown!