by Sigoney Holder Sep 1, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
first love
There's nothing quite like it I swear |
I like your poem, though random, which mine is too, but I like the truth that is portryed and put into though perepctive =) |
Thank you it means a lot. |
by Nicko
I like this one, the rhyme seems almost random yet it is well structured and flows well. A fitting title for a nicely balanced poem. The way you have gaps between the lines makes it a little harder for me to read though and line 2 “ even though I try to lose it always seem to be there†should there be a comma between lose and it? and seem should be seems yeah? But still a good read well done |
Thank you for your comment I just write down things that are in my head. I wouldn't really call myself a poet. |