I like this one, the rhyme seems almost random yet it is well structured and flows well. A fitting title for a nicely balanced poem. The way you have gaps between the lines makes it a little harder for me to read though and line 2 “ even though I try to lose it always seem to be there” should there be a comma between lose and it? and seem should be seems yeah? But still a good read well done
Nicko

I like your poem, though random, which mine is too, but I like the truth that is portryed and put into though perepctive =)