This was great! A very good attempt at Noura's huge and very difficult challenge.

I liked the rhymes at the beginning but these didnt carry on, not that they had to, but it kind of disturbed the flow.

Other than that the words were used well.

Well done
Love
Tara
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This is really good :) :) I absolutely loved it :)
I was gonna see if I had a favorite part but truth is I love it all... Great job :) 5/5

So this is an example of what Noura is trying to do to us lol. I didn't get all the details but this is very well done, I enjoyed it and learned a few things lol

Connie

^^^LOL Connie you naughty :P:P

Ok, it is time to confess that the challenge was a disaster :P But believe me you mastered YOU did an awesome job and proved how amazing your writing abilities are!
Good work, I hope to read more from you soon. :)