by Melpomene
Lu, |
I don't know what to say after reading this, I have no witty comments or helpful suggestions. I am still trying to catch my breath from a poem that stole the air from my lungs. |
by Britt
So here I am giggling at your alliteration, basking in your imagery and absorbing in every line, and you hit me with heartbreak. This was so unexpected! I kept reading the first few stanzas trying to figure out where this was going, because it wasn't quite adding up or making sense yet, until I hit that ending. |
Simply breathtaking. Very rare do i find a poem with message as deep as this one. |
by Blissful
Wow Lu, I am blown away. This was powerful beyond words and I am so happy I read it. This really got me thinking and after reading this, my tomorrow will never be the same. |
by Blissful
I was so mesmerized with this poem reading it the first time, I didn't notice this minor typo. |
by Lu
Thank you Bliss for noticing the typo, much appreciated hun ~hugs~ |
Wow Lu this was beautiful, so heartfelt, I am glad I decided to come take a peek :) |