Comments : Alone in this cold world

  • 13 years ago

    by anonymous

    Love this part ~Crying out her eyes,
    she doesn't care to write a suicide letter,
    she ties the rope,
    wraps it around her neck,
    takes one last gulp of air,
    & says goodbye

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I love the title. .. the poem it self was really upseting but your talent shines through evryword i loved it. ... happy one next? ??

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Mmmmm... This is very good and very touching... Reaches out an makes u wanna cry along an how sadness turns to hatred... I really loved it girl :) :) 5/5