Nicely written :)

Nicely written :)

Wow Girl, One of your best poems by far. I loved this.

I long to see you
I cherish talking with you
Breathing it all in.
You've possessed my feelings
Making me complete
Shiny and new
Just for you.

One of my fav stanzas. He repaired your broken heart & all you want him to do is just stay there with you. Everybody can relate to this, finding somebody new & growing attached and wanting them to stay, and knowing you'll get broken again if they leave.

Don't leave me in silence
Left to worry if you're OK
Because it will kill me inside.

Love this one too. Silence makes us girls think the craziest thoughts when we dont hear from the ones we like/love. All you want is hear there voice and to know there okay so we can settle our racing hearts and mentally insane brain thoughts lol <3
But amazing poem Love it.
5/5

I agree ..heartfelt write..5 sweets..sugar..