This is very truthful emotion strong and very good :) 5/5

Noura might freak a little if she sees that you capitalised all letters that the verses start with, I used to do that aswell though because I was convinced it's right, but back to topic:
I think this is a well penned poem that flows good and I think that it is realyl meaning full. Well done :)

Power to the People :-) this rocked

Connie

Connie and Jenni are right. :p

I really like this. Nice to see a new member of our club that writes greatly, also :)
WELL WELL WELL

I'm waiting for other writes.