by Jess Sep 2, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Im a scared little girl, with a strong smile. |
Once again you have writen a poem with attitude! I loved how you said everyone was somebody no matter what walk of life they came from. |
by BlueJay
I also love this. You make excellent points and many people feel this way, so you are not alone. Through this piece you did put us in your shoes a bit, thank you for that |
by ana
Awwe. this is soo sad, I loved the way you have your words and the flowing of the poem.. Its sad to see the way people hide things. I loved this poem though |
by Paul Gondwe
The imagery,your choice of words is just superb..loved it.... |
by Paul Gondwe
The imagery,your choice of words is just superb..loved it.... |