Good job! has a lot of emotion behind it.

His is nice:) I liked the poem:):)

The imagery,your choice of words is just superb..loved it....

The imagery,your choice of words is just superb..loved it....

Awwe. this is soo sad, I loved the way you have your words and the flowing of the poem.. Its sad to see the way people hide things. I loved this poem though

I also love this. You make excellent points and many people feel this way, so you are not alone. Through this piece you did put us in your shoes a bit, thank you for that

Once again you have writen a poem with attitude! I loved how you said everyone was somebody no matter what walk of life they came from.

5.5