by Jenni
This is so powerful and heartbreaking. I also like the flow and think that you wrote a really good poem. I hope that it's not you feeling this way. This poem is filled with strong emotions that really got to me. |
It kinda is about me.but i dont like using myself anymore.so i use words like she or her |
by Blackstar
Amazing |
Even though i have never been in that situation i can almost feel sympathy for you...very well writen... |
by Craig
This poem is soo heartfelt, it actually brought a tear to my eye thinking of how much pain and emotion you have. i really like this poem it flows well and has a powerful image. being alone is like torture and it does hurt so bad cause i know how it feels. once again an amazing poem. |
by Georgia
Very powerful, and I can relate. Good poem :) 5\5 |
by LoVerSLaND
Very nice, 5/5 |