I really liked it...
Do you smell the flowers blooming,
the smell of spring,
the essence of life,

Can you see how beautiful nature is,
that its so serene,
take a deep breath,
close your eyes,
spin around with your arms in the arm,
to know you're free,
to feel that you're truly alive.

Can you feel,
the flutter of butterflies escaping from there cocoon,
the baby birds learning how to fly,
the mothers protecting there new born babies,
can you feel it becoming a part of you,
smelling the fresh air,
feeling the wind embrace your body.

these are my most favorite parts and everything works sooo well in this poem its perfect for being ur first :) :) :) 5/5