Comments : Pull Me In Closer

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow i think this may be your best love poem yet i absolutely loved everything :) :)
    Pull me in closer,
    don't release your grasp,
    I'm falling for you,
    <3
    where you & i grow old together
    I soooo want something like that :)

    Together,
    were lay on the hood of your truck,
    look into the sky,
    watching the shooting stars fly by,
    making a wish,
    that this never ends,
    that together were make it through anything.
    pretty much my favorite stanza but i loved all of it 10/10 girl :) hehehehhe
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is sweet, simple and overall wonderful. Great job.