Something

by Captain Lonesome   Sep 3, 2011


I am a mess
Inside completely stressed
Vulnerability growing
Never knowing
What is holding me back
Waiting to be attacked
I wanna scream, but not shout
Whats that all about
Finding the strength
Reaching the length
Coming around
Followed the sound
Of the small still voice
Made the right choice
At this poems end
Truth told to a friend
I am half way through
Whats to come is still new

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  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Really nice rhyme and fantastic flow. A message of life embedded in this good write.
    I love the last few lines it brought it all together..facing the unknown ..it's an adventure isn't it

    Connie

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Great Write :)
    The flow was really good and I like the selection of words you used to create this great piece!
    I love the last line because it is a deep reflection of reality.. we always find everything as new whether we like it or dislike it is up to us and our perception of the world :)
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is really good I loved it...
    At this poems end
    Truth told to a friend
    I am half way through
    Whats to come is still new
    This is most favorite or reaching out to me but all in all I loved it <3 :) 5/5

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