Wow this is really good I loved it...
At this poems end
Truth told to a friend
I am half way through
Whats to come is still new
This is most favorite or reaching out to me but all in all I loved it <3 :) 5/5
13 years ago
by Sparkling snow flake
Great Write :)
The flow was really good and I like the selection of words you used to create this great piece!
I love the last line because it is a deep reflection of reality.. we always find everything as new whether we like it or dislike it is up to us and our perception of the world :)
5/5
Really nice rhyme and fantastic flow. A message of life embedded in this good write.
I love the last few lines it brought it all together..facing the unknown ..it's an adventure isn't it