Comments : I Can't Tell You

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow Girl, this is an amazing poem. It flowed well & you could just feel the emotions.

    All the words I can't say
    Levitate above my head
    Scrambled around in my heart
    The true emotions I meant
    So I'll just keep sitting in here
    Wallowing in my own self pity
    Until I pick up the bravery
    To walk almost the whole city

    Loved this stanza. Just waiting till finally you're strong enough to get up & go to him and find out the truth.
    Amazing job<3
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    Thanks holly.

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    You're welcome girl.:)