Comments : Hurt

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I'm sorry girl,i know how all this feels. Guys always doin the good girls dirty,its not right.
    I loved this poem, the hurt just poured through, you shouldnt care but its just how us girls are built.

    My world is a desert,
    Each crack a memory.
    Only filled
    With the ghost of me.

    love this stanza...shows how much you've been hurt & that now theres nothing there but the ghost of a hurt girl lingering wanting pure love w no hurt.
    amazing job, you know im ALWAYS here for you girl. Love you 1000/1000(:

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    I think ,i am lost in your poetry,5 again