by believeinlove87 Sep 3, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Memories, |
We'll be alright girl :) 5/5 |
by BlueJay
This is amazing, excellent job. I love how much emotion has been inserted. There is a point/message that is clear. Your beginning is okay, but it really isn't that strong. Your ending is okay, but it isn't much better then just saying the end in the middle of a book. There is part of a flow, but not much of one. Your word choice is fantastic. |