This is amazing, excellent job. I love how much emotion has been inserted. There is a point/message that is clear. Your beginning is okay, but it really isn't that strong. Your ending is okay, but it isn't much better then just saying the end in the middle of a book. There is part of a flow, but not much of one. Your word choice is fantastic.

All it took,
was looking at our old pictures,
i can't seem to erase the ones on my photobucket,
holding onto the memories,
wanting to have a piece of you left,
but not wanting you at all anymore.

^^ Is my favorite stanza, because it shows just how much you long for the person.

We'll be alright girl :) 5/5