by believeinlove87 Sep 3, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The smell of candles, |
This is really good 5/5 :) |
by BlueJay
Wow, this is sad, for sure. But it is beautifully written. There is emotion, imagery, and a story. Your begging was great, your end was strong. Your word choice is spectacular. I love how you have the stories of your past with her. Great job. |