by believeinlove87 Sep 3, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
What happened to forever, |
by yogi73
I get where you're coming from with the poem, but seems like a lot of cliches sorta strung together. nice flow though. |
Do you remember our first kiss, |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. Very full of emotions. It was nicely worded for the most part, it was a little repetitive. It is a good length and it flowed good from beginning to end. other then maybe getting rid of some of the repetitiveness I see nothing else that needs to be fixed. |