Absolutely and agonizingly beautiful. 5/5. great job, gurl !

Thank you :)

Wow that is amazing :)
love it !!
stay strong xx

Very good and very sad poem. It is written nicely and the wording was great. It is also a good length. The flow was good from beginning to end.

Gave it a 5/5

Correction to the commenter above, not nice length wonderful length. Great use of emotion, beautiful descriptions and word choice, and you have created a lovely flow. I absolutely love this piece and can totally understand what,you mean. It truely is a beautiful piece, on which I think you have done a fabulous job. I hope to read even more. But for now amazing job please keep it up.

Though I am so sorry you feel or felt this way.

Wow... Love it girl one of ur best :) :) 5/5

This poem is really nice. Its sad but you did a good job at expressing your emotions!

I simply loved it..so much of pain she's goin through damn..... <3
5/5 truly deserving :)

Beautiful. Emotional. I can almost feel the pain in the amazing poem. Keep it up girl ;)

So saaad as it seems, but, it's just life. It takes these droplets for a true wipe, to breeze in.. Great n well written. Bravo!