Signals

by Poet on the Piano   Sep 3, 2011


I chase his name
upon a railway,
where daises sprout
in miss-you crushes...

I find the code
for dependable passion,
no longer trudging
in a destructive
abyss.

He echoes scent
upon faint arrivals...
I awaken and dream
of his Old Spice
flickering;
I'll be tender
for limitless moons.

Written 8/18/2011.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    Amazing girl :)

    The judges said enough. I'll post what they said here :p

    hahhaha :p And I'll get a praised comment for it?

    LOL, no, kidding :p

    --- Judge #1---
    This is perfection. Wording ,flow , content and structure flawless in this humble
    opinion.. Usage of words was choice and clear. No suggestions can be made to
    improve this piece!

    ---Judge #2----

    This write hit home for me, it was unique! the writer is really creative with his/her words. I don't know what else to say, except that I took 2 points away because of this expression: "destructive
    abyss." it wasn't creative at all, contrary to the other expressions in this piece.

    :)

    and my opinion: AMAZING. suffice?

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