Amazing girl :)

The judges said enough. I'll post what they said here :p

hahhaha :p And I'll get a praised comment for it?

LOL, no, kidding :p

--- Judge #1---
This is perfection. Wording ,flow , content and structure flawless in this humble
opinion.. Usage of words was choice and clear. No suggestions can be made to
improve this piece!

---Judge #2----

This write hit home for me, it was unique! the writer is really creative with his/her words. I don't know what else to say, except that I took 2 points away because of this expression: "destructive
abyss." it wasn't creative at all, contrary to the other expressions in this piece.

:)

and my opinion: AMAZING. suffice?