I think this was so down to earth and penned with a questioning mind. Is it possible to fear being happy..Most definitely, not happiness it's self but the end of it. |
A very nice piece that clearly exchanges thoughts and feelings for words. And done in a way that is clear to it's truth. I don't understand why so few comments are made about poetry on this site. It should be more nourishing on here I would like to think. |
by ChrisT
This was really well written. It takes alot to realize fears and realizing them is the first step to overcoming them great poem |
by Lofallenve
Oh my gosh. I think we think on the same wavelength. It is a great poem you wrote dear, but a really bad thought-process to keep yourself in. I speak from experience. Overcome your fears and Carpe Diem(seize the day) and just do. :) You'll actually be surprised with the outcome. |
by Marvellous
Victory achieved, is Fear conquered. Pain only comes, from what you fear. |