She's Alone

All of this bloody murder,
Because someone desert her.

^ just curious but shouldnt desert be deserted her?

other than that even for a short piece this is well done. great job.

Where loneliness bangs, guard loosens. Within unity, lies freedom.

I feel so alone at times i like this poem short and sweet love it :) Tyler

Great job tyler<3 i really felt the emotion in this poem<3katie

I love it Tyler. I love how it is short but it makes perfect sense. 5/5 Great job. Love ya Tyler :D