I liked it. The wording was good. It flowed nicely from beginning to end. I see nothing that needs to be worked on.

I gave it a 5/5

Wow Connie, I loved this!!

The flow was absolutely flawless, and the rhymes were awesome.
Pure Brilliance in this, such a sad emotional write
Loved the wording and the imagery which was soft yet nice

Love
Tara-Kay
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Jesussssss CHRIST!!!
what the hell???

what are you????
what are u made from???

this took me away ....i loved this! u r a professional...indeed. :)

good work, huni..five. :)

Reading this, it kinda brought me to those medieval kinda place where knights in shining armor, queens and dragons and all those stuff exists, I really enjoyed reading this, as in REALLY enjoyed it. Amazing.
Hey, Im running out of words to compliment your work here, so do me a favor and write something that sucks once in a while ok? lol. :D

Sweet sadness,
I can read this over and over again without feeling sad.
Lovely

Wow!

Connie.

G-R-E-A-T.
actually, the opening was my favorite:

He kisses his queen's
soft alabaster skin
black wings spread to
embrace pulling her in.
^ 'alabaster' - nice word;) It gave it volume!

And the flow here was AMAZING. No interruptions at all :)

wELL DONE ;)

Perfect!!!! what else can be said ... truly blessed with talent x

The flow was really good so as the choice of words, this poem is incredible :) 5/5

Beeeeeeeeeautiful it is ...loved it :)

Wow Connie, this poem is so well-written... I loved the story you told within this poem, the title caught my eye and it was very intriguing. I loved your use of words, each word was the perfect choice, especially the use of the word "alabaster" .. I loved the dream, it was like a dream we've all had at some point.. and I like how in the end, she realizes it was just a dream which made it more realistic. Great job!!! 5/5

Nice title. *winks*

The flow and rhythm of the poem is just perfect, as well as the cascade of emotions that pour from every lines. Loving the ethereal tone of this piece. :D

I could "Feel" this one. very nicely done! you write quite well Connie...great wordology I made that a word and My wife often calls me a wordologist, I think this one deffinately qualifies. 5's but thinks it should be 10'S.

A dream i know well. but it seems all a bit too haunting when you pictures a specific person from your past. then you wake up from the dream and come back to reality. i'd rather just sleep away reality and live in my dream world where everything feels right again.

a wonderful write.

thank you for sharing

~Kuro