Ill be on my way.

by Samantha   Sep 4, 2011


The cigarettes you light,
One after another,
Won't help you forget her.
And the way that you love her.

So i guess ill be on my way
While you smoke a 20 pack every day
You know i miss her too
But i really want the best for you.

My mother is gone.
And soon you will be also.
I found you collapsed in the lawn.
Your love for me is gone.

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  • 13 years ago

    by lOsT sOuL

    This is really a sad poem.... but i love it .. it's so heart touching, you have shown ur pain in such a good way.. i love this..
    The cigarettes you light,
    One after another,
    Won't help you forget her.
    And the way that you love her.

    I love this Stanza too.. it is a nice work.. :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Love this Poem girl. You can feel how hurt you are, it flowed so good.

    The cigarettes you light,
    One after another,
    Won't help you forget her.
    And the way that you love her.

    I loved this stanza,saying no matter what he doesnt she'll always be on his mind. Great job girl. <3 Loved it.
    5/5

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