Head over heels

by Dave   Sep 4, 2011


I love you so much, I don't know why.
you could make me so happy, but lately all you make me do is cry.
I feel so rejected like you don't want to be with me,
When all I want is to be with you in a happy family.
It lifts me up when I see your face,
and your voice takes me to my happy place.
The touch of your soft skin turns me on,
you will always be beautiful to me thats no con.
You started out long ago as my best friend,
now I want to be with you until the end.
You help me with choices to better my life,
One day I want to give you the choice of becoming my wife.
Now I've tried to express the way you make me feel,
theres not a single doubt these feelings are real.
It took a long time but you won my heart,
I will miss you so much if we ever part.
I love you so much, I don't know why.
You can make me so happy, all you have to do is try

DRK 9/4/2011

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  • 13 years ago

    by Dawn

    I love it and all I can say is that "I WISH THERE WERE MORE GUYS LIKE YOU!!!!!"

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is very lyrical, yet expressed emotion very welll

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Seems you have a lot of fans :-) I can see why, the overall feel of this is very touching with sensual overtones. It didn't flow as well as it could have but I think you wrote a winner ..Touching , emotional , excellent

  • 13 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Ahha that's all i can say! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Wow this poem blew me away. I love your use of words its beautiful and its a great write for starting poetry... I find love poems the hardest to write! I enjoyed reading this one thanks for sharing Dave :)
    A well deserved 5/5

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