First of all I'd like to tell you that I think you should work on the flow abit because this poem didn't flow that smoothly, but it's not as bad as it may sound.

I like the fact that your poem has two part and the first shows a different emotional situation than the second one does, which had me quite captivated. The first seems to be filled with disappointment, hurt and sorrow, while the second one feels like desperate hope and need. I like the structure of the second stanza quite well. Overall I think this is a well written poem with heartfelt emotions, but it could be even better if the flow was smoother.

So dark I love it , it's going to my favorites