One of my Favorites<3.
Such hurt strong emotion poured through out this whole piece!

As I take one last breath
I raised the shattered glass to my veins
Close my eyes, say one last word,
"Forever I should part".

Love this stanza. Shows how badly you were hurt & that you can't take it anymore.

Amazing Job<3
1000/1000(:

The feeling is so bold in here, it really impacts me. Listening and beginning to see in front of my eyes how your character is abused by that past- and the hurt that keeps building and unravelling.

True emotions that lets everything in your soul just out.
Good write- very powerful

MaryAnne

Wow, this had emotions running. I love this kind of poetry.....
:o)