Simple, yet straight to the point
i fell in love with the contradictory images you've provided,
This style you're now writing in is way better than your old style,
what i <3 the most about your poem is that every single person can relate to it,
everyone have had their addiction
it could be drugs, it could be loving a person
it can even be a Online game...
and it's hard to to keep away from it even if you love it the most
5/5 and this is Nominated no doubt,
god bless you.

I loved this and I have to agree with Rabea. So easy to relate! <3

Collect it all, take it back,
take every breath you gave
me, take every heart beat
you caused, leave me here,
-Breathless.

beautiful writen girl your talent shines through every word 5/5